Comments for Expect a Miracle http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com Book 1 in the Christian Detective Series Mon, 08 Sep 2008 15:31:25 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Last Excerpt? Hmmmmmm by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/09/08/last-excerpt-hmmmmmm/#comment-67 gingerporter Mon, 08 Sep 2008 15:31:25 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=60#comment-67 This is torture, pure and simple. I bet you are enjoying it.... :-) This is torture, pure and simple. I bet you are enjoying it…. :-)

]]> Comment on Chapter 21 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/03/12/chapter-21-excerpt/#comment-41 gingerporter Thu, 13 Mar 2008 02:33:21 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=24#comment-41 "“Oh, well the Captain wouldn’t tell me any specifics, like, you know. So you know Jimmy, I was jus’ kinda’ wonderin’ what all was up, you know?”" That should be Darin and not Jimmy in this paragraph. I am only pointing out name changes that need to be made...the typos I know you will get later. Good post. <strong><em>No that should be Jimmy. Its fixed so that it reads correctly now.</em></strong> ““Oh, well the Captain wouldn’t tell me any specifics, like, you know. So you know Jimmy, I was jus’ kinda’ wonderin’ what all was up, you know?””

That should be Darin and not Jimmy in this paragraph. I am only pointing out name changes that need to be made…the typos I know you will get later. Good post.

No that should be Jimmy. Its fixed so that it reads correctly now.

]]> Comment on Chapter 19 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/03/06/chapter-19-excerpt/#comment-37 gingerporter Fri, 07 Mar 2008 01:53:13 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-37 Pretty Good..... Pretty Good…..

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]]> Comment on Chapter 17 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/chapter-17-excerpt/#comment-34 gingerporter Tue, 04 Mar 2008 19:18:43 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=20#comment-34 Okay...reads better with the mayor issue cleared up...you know I am not trying to be difficult...I don't nit pick but that stuck out like a soar thumb... :-) <strong><em>I wouldn't call it nit picking and I'll take all the help I can get! Thanks!</em></strong> Okay…reads better with the mayor issue cleared up…you know I am not trying to be difficult…I don’t nit pick but that stuck out like a soar thumb… :-)

I wouldn’t call it nit picking and I’ll take all the help I can get!

Thanks!

]]> Comment on Chapter 17 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/chapter-17-excerpt/#comment-33 gingerporter Tue, 04 Mar 2008 02:51:38 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=20#comment-33 Interesting twist you have there....no need for filler I will go with what you have unless you change your mind and offer. I know this is a rough draft....but several places you meant to type commissioner and you typed in mayor. You word count has gone up quite a bit....90K? How many more chapters we talking here Sir..... :-) <strong><em>We're probably looking at 25 to 30 Chapters. And yeah....sometimes I get the references confused....but that's what the first edit if for right? </em></strong> :) Interesting twist you have there….no need for filler I will go with what you have unless you change your mind and offer. I know this is a rough draft….but several places you meant to type commissioner and you typed in mayor.

You word count has gone up quite a bit….90K? How many more chapters we talking here Sir….. :-)

We’re probably looking at 25 to 30 Chapters. And yeah….sometimes I get the references confused….but that’s what the first edit if for right? :)

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]]> Comment on Chapter 15 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/02/22/chapter-15-excerpt/#comment-28 gingerporter Tue, 26 Feb 2008 00:55:37 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=18#comment-28 Oh my....I didn't think of Garcia. I was thinking someone else on the force or his family. Oh my….I didn’t think of Garcia. I was thinking someone else on the force or his family.

]]> Comment on Chapter 13 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/02/08/chapter-13-excerpt/#comment-27 gingerporter Thu, 14 Feb 2008 15:41:15 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=17#comment-27 Yes I figured as much....but still it doesn't hurt to ask... :P Yes I figured as much….but still it doesn’t hurt to ask… :P

]]> Comment on Chapter 13 Excerpt by gingerporter http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/2008/02/08/chapter-13-excerpt/#comment-26 gingerporter Thu, 14 Feb 2008 14:37:26 +0000 http://expectamiracle.wordpress.com/?p=17#comment-26 Very interesting....will this be one of the specially trained attack dogs that attacks on code? The doc suggested the K-9 patrol. Is she also on the Campinieri payroll? <strong><em>Now you know I can't answer those questions. :) I guess you'll just have to keep on reading</em>.</strong> Very interesting….will this be one of the specially trained attack dogs that attacks on code?

The doc suggested the K-9 patrol. Is she also on the Campinieri payroll?

Now you know I can’t answer those questions. :) I guess you’ll just have to keep on reading.

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