Chapter 15 Excerpt

Believe it or not, I’m still at it.  Here we are now up to chapter 15.  Thanks to all of you who are still out there reading and giving your input.  Here is a little from Chapter 15.  Enjoy it.  The next post will probably not be until Chapter 17 or 18.  

It was an ordinary patrol day.  The weather was sunny and clear, the streets were not crowded everyone seemed to be in order and the police radio, aside from the normal dispatcher chitter chatter, was virtually quiet.  Darin and Max drove through the streets on the outer boundaries on their beat to make sure that things on the fringes were OK.  Everything appeared to be in perfect order.

As they drove, Darin too a glance at his watch.  It was just about time for lunch…..
“Almost lunch time, buddy,” Darin said to Max, “You about ready to stop and get something to eat?”

Max barked an affrimative in reply to Darin’s question.

Darin had to stop and think for a second.   There were a lot of people who would think that he should be committed for sitting here having a conversation about lunch time with a dog.  But that was just it…. Max was not just any dog. Max was his partner.  As much as a lot of people would not have been able to comprehend the concept, Max and Darin understood each other.  It was the same with most K-9 handlers and their partners.  The K-9 had at least a general understanding —but more commonly a complete understanding— of what their partner was trying to communicate to them.  They learned to understand without having to say a lot.

Many times it was just the situation that could change the whole context of a command.  Darin thought about how many times all he had to say was, “Go Max!” and Max was off and running and knew exactly what he was expected to do.  Darin did not always have to tell Max what mode he had to be in.  It was clear from the situation whether his task was search and rescue, criminal apprehension, Safety intervention, Protection or something else.   It was Darin’s job to make it clear when it wasn’t and it was Max’s job to not act right away when he was unsure of what he was supposed to do.

So far, Max and Darin clicked so well together that there had not been any issues as to what actions were supposed be performed and when.   Max always performed as he was supposed to.  Both his and Darin’s training had served them well.

As Darin was cruising along the normal dispatcher chitter chatter suddenly changed……

Calling Detective Frost and all units in the Vicinity.
We’re showing a silent alarm at 229 Main Street.
No further information at this time.
Proceed as if we have a 211 in progress
We suggest that you go in advertising.
Detective Frost do you copy?

Darin stopped his car and used his good hand to grab the microphone and depress the talk button….
“Roger Central I copy that.  Proceeding to 229 to cover a silent alarm.  Proceeding as if there is a 211 in progress.   Roll Backups.  Advertising all the way!”

“Roger that, Detective,” came the answer, “backups are rolling.
Be advised that GPS shows you’re the only unit in the vicinity.
My map is showing you could be without backup for 2 – 3 minutes.”

“Roger.”

Darin turned on this lights and siren and stepped on the gas.  Max barked excitedly.  He knew something was going down, but had no idea what.  Darin’s first thought was one of complete arrogance.  He thought…”how dare somebody try to pull a robbery on MY beat.” But that thought was quickly trumped by the sudden realization of where 229 Main street was.   That was Garcia’s Grocery store.

Garcia was the most passive man that Darin had ever know.  He wouldn’t hurt anybody or anything.  And Darin was sure that Garcia did not have a weapon.  It took Darin and Jamie several months to convince Garcia that he needed to install an alarm system in his store.  Frankly, Garcia just did not see the need.  Now Darin was thinking, he made a good call.  How glad he was now that he thought to install an alarm button just under the couner where the register was.

If this was in fact a robbery, Darin knew that Garcia would be very cooperative.  Garicia didn’t care about the money.  He would probably be witnessing the would be criminal the entire time he was trying to get the money out of the register.  Even though he knew it would be aggravating to a criminal who was very likely a sinner destined for hell because he’d rejected God, Garcia knew he was going to heaven and was none too scared of being shot.  Hopefully, thought Darin, that was not going to be an issue.

Darin tried to calm himself as he rapidly made the turn onto Main Street and was now 1 block away from Garcia’s store.  He traversed the 1 block distance in no time at all at the speed he was going and came to a screeching halt in front of the store.  They were the first to arrive.  Darin absentmindedly hid the side hatch button that allowed Max to exit and the partners carefully approached the store and went in slowly and quietly.   Something was wrong.  It was too quiet.  Garcia was always ambling about the store.  Darin joked with him about having ADD because he could not keep still.  When he was in the store, he was always moving.

Darin cautiously called Garcia’s name.  In answer, he heard a groan from behind the counter.   Darin rushed behind the counter where he found Garcia on the floor with a pool of blood around him and a very obvious gunshot wound to the chest.

Darin immediately depressed the talk button on the microphone…..
“Dispatch I need an ambulance here and I need it yesterday.  We have a man down with a gun shot wound to the chest.  Doesn’t look good.”

“Garcia?”  came the response from the dispatcher.

Darin didn’t know how he knew him or what his ties were.  He could only sullenly reply in the affirmative….”Yeah….Garcia”

“Garcia! Garcia!  Its Darin Frost.  Can you hear me?”

Garcia turned his head in Darin’s direction. He was just able to get out a few words.  He said….. “They’re looking for you.”

“Who’s looking for me?  Who did this to you?”  But even as he asked the questions, Darin knew the answers already.

Garcia spoke again in short and gasping breaths…. “Said….the boss……..the boss wanted…….leave you….. a….messssss……..sage.”  With that Garcia’s strength seemed to have left him.  Darin was cradling the man’s head and praying that God would help him to hold on if it was His will.

Just then Darin eyes opened as he simultaneously heard the familiar protective growl of Max in action and felt the whiz of a bullet past his ear that had just barely missed him.  Darin looked over to see Max in the process of disarming the shooter.  Darin knew at that moment that if it were not for Max’s quick action which  threw off the shooter’s aim, he would be lying wounded or dead right here next to his friend.  Darin praise the Lord for Max and scolded himself for not being more alert and making sure the are was secure.

Darin heard the slamming of a couple of doors. A couple of units he supposed that came in without advertising.  He saw the uniformed officers in just seconds and gave Max the command to guard and stand down.  The officers took over cuffed the shooter.  Just seconds later Darin heard the unmistakable sound of the ambulance pull up and got out of the way as the paramedics did their job.

For all that Darin could do, Garcia was D.O.A. at the hospital.  Darin knew that somehow, some way, Garcia was killed because of him.  He also knew that Mikey Campinieri was the man who was responsible for his death and he was going to prove it.

Published in:  on February 22, 2008 at 8:36 pm Comments (1)
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Chapter 13 Excerpt

As promised, the writing hiatus was short and is now over…..but be prepared for short breaks while I review technincal details.  Of course a lot of this will be edited/modified/re-written with the first edit (that I like to so affectionately call the slash of the editor’s pen) and then updated even more with the first read through of “privilleged ones.”  All that having been said… Here’s a short piece for from Chapter thirteen, getting up back on track with our main plot…

Late one evening black sedan with tinted black windows pulled up to the dog training facility.  The driver got out, pulled his jacket closed to completely conceal his gun and very deliberately opened the door for the man in the passenger seat. 

Out stepped Lenny Cartelli, Mikey Campinieri’s right hand man.  Lenny Cartelli stood an impressive 6 feet, 4 inches tall.  His wavy, brown hair was well groomed with straight part down the left side.  Not a hair out of place.  He was clean shaven and medium width eyebrows covered his serious looking  gray eyes.  Cartelli was dressed immaculately in a blue, pinstriped, Giorgio Valenti, hand-made designer suit that cost no less than $1,000.00.  His shiny, black, woven, tassel Zellin Italian shoes, priced at $250 a pair stood out as well, and made no noise as he took each step.  His outfit was touched off by a $70 Gitman red silk tie and a $120 Coppley dress shirt, pressed so as not have a single wrinkle.  He wore a 24K gold wedding band on his left hand, with three rows of diamonds inlaid in a diagonal pattern.  Cartelli’s stride was purposeful and sure.  Flanked now by two body guards that seemed to to just appear out of nowhere, they headed to the head trainer’s office.

The head trainer, Jeffrey O’Day, sat at his desk and stood immediately when Cartelli walked into the office with his henchman.  O’Day motioned toward his chair, offering it to Cartelli as he stepped out to the way.

“No, I appreciate the gesture O’Day and it is noted, but I won’t be long.  You can sit back down”

As he sat back in his chair Jeffrey O’Day asked, with the utmost respect in his voice, “What can I do for you today Mr. Cartelli?  I wasn’t expecting a visit from you this evening.”

“Always expect me, O’Day.  You never know when I might show up,” said Cartelli.  The he smiled slightly and said, “Like right now.”

“Right sir.”

“I was just checking to make sure that the ‘Frost Situation’ was under control.”

“Well sir, there has been a little problem with that —-”

“Mr. Campinieri doesn’t want to hear about problems unless you already have a solution.”

“I understand, Sir.  And I have already dealt with the problem.   Everything is back on track, I just had to modify the plan a little.”

“Whatever it takes, O’Day.  And you make sure it works.  ‘The Family’ would hate to see one of its loyal…uhh shall we say employees?…..have a life threatening accident.”

“Of course, sir.  You can tell Mr. Campinieri that all is under control.  Would you like an update on the plan, Sir.”

“Not necessary.  I’m sure you’ll make it work.  If Mikey wants an update, I know where to find you!  You just make sure that we don’t miss!  Mikey wasn’t too happy when your buddies blew it with the Carpenter girl.  We’ve cleaned up that mess…if you know what I mean….That is to say don’t bother calling them for help in the future.  They’re permanently unreachable.  Besides, I dont’ know a cell phone yet that can operate from within a cement block.  After we get Frost out of the way, we’ll take care of the Carpenter girll ourselves.”

“Yes, sir.  I can see why you would want to do that.  So as not to arise any suspicion, I have something very crafty planned.  It will take just a little while, out of necessity, but I believe Mr. C will be very happy with it.”

Cartelli snapped his fingers and one of his henchmen reached into suit jacket and pulled out two wrapped bank stacks of brand new, crisp 100 dollar bills and threw them on O’Day’s desk.

“As usual, O’Day, there’s more where that came from.  And don’t try to deposit more than $1,000 dollars at a time or else you’ll raise suspicion.  These bills are clean and can’t be traced back to the family.  You’re the only one that will be burned if you do something stupid.”

Jeffrey O’Day looked at the  $20,000 dollars on his desk.  This had been the biggest “payday” he’s had yet  since he turned corrupt six years ago and began working for the Campinieri family.  The Campinieri’s had been true to their word.  He got a guaranteed payday every week.  There was no negotiated price and he never knew how much it was going to be, but, lately, he had come to expect between five and ten thousand dollars each time.  He knew better than to ever complain about the amount and his silence had earned him some higher payments.  Jeffrey O’Day had never known how he was going to be paid either.  He found his payments left to him in all sorts of places.  Sometimes with a note left so that he knew where to look; and other times he’d open his lunch and there would be a payment.  Whoever was in charge, definitely liked to be original.  And sometimes, like today, he got a payment in person.  As long as he was doing “well” Jeffrey O’Day knew that Lenny Cartelli never left without making some type of payment.

“Anything you need from us, O’Day?”

“Yes.  As a matter of fact.  I will need another man that nobody know inserted into the program and I will have a “specially trained” dog for him and work with him myself.”

“A specially trained dog?” Cartelli said as he raised his eyebrows.  Hmmmm, I think I like where you’re going.  I’ll have a man for you in three days.  Don’t let us down!”

Before Jeffrey O’Day even had a chance to respond, Cartelli and his men were out of the door and headed back toward the sedan without so much as a good bye.

Jeffrey O’Day stashed the two stacks of hundreds in his brief case without counting it.  He knew he didn’t have to.  Now that he knew that he was going have a Campinieri loyalist to work with, he began making detailed plans in his head.  It was time to get rid of Darin Frost once and for all.  With everything that he knew, he was still a threat to Mikey Campinieri and that just could not be risked any longer.

Published in:  on February 8, 2008 at 10:17 am Comments (2)

A short writing hiatus

Sorry for the inconvenience that this will cause my loyal readers, but I am forced to take a short (and yes, I do plan on short–meaning a week or less) writing hiatus to do some research.  In order for me to “turn the corner” with this book and begin writing the next piece, I have to do some research and possibly an interview or two.  While I am writing a work of fiction, I would like there to be an element of believability to what I am writing.  So, while I take a few days to do some research, go tell a few friends about my blog and let them read and comment!  I would appreciate more readers.

Published in:  on February 3, 2008 at 3:12 pm Leave a Comment